A Beautiful Suicide


Reflection

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A delicate proposition is presented to all. 

An ending proposed.

All potential destroyed.

And in it’s place, a standing tall.

What was held within the hand;

A futile life indeed.

No hope of better days.

A place appears, for standing tall.

Come over here, you pride of man.

You’ve cursed me far too long.

It’s time to meet your blackest day.

Light dawns, for standing tall.

Within my hand is placed the tool,

Which ends your bloody cravings.

What you desire is not to be.

In this place for standing tall.

4 thoughts on “A Beautiful Suicide

  1. Suicide is rarely beautiful. In some cases it can be a final, welcome end to pain, like a painful terminal illness for example. In most cases, it’s the result of an inability to find a better way out of the pain. Usually there is a way out. Sometimes people can find a way out on their own. But often enough they can’t. When they can’t, they need the help of others. There is no shame in seeking out help. Professional psychologists are trained to help people find the answers that are hidden within themselves, answers that they can’t always find on their own. It can mean the difference between savoring your remaining years and having positive impact on the lives of your loved ones, or forfeiting those years forever.

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    • While the killing of one’s self is a seriously foolish end to many wrong choices, there is a death spoken of in this post which is absolutely necessary; the killing of the pride of man. I’d like to think you didn’t miss the point.

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  2. Well said hiway christian. The death spoken of in this post must be self inflicted. Absolutely beautiful post! Your writing is incredible.

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  3. The Lord Jesus gathers Glory for The Father, by His work in all His children.

    Thank you Father, for Your gentle mercy to allow such words to be spoken. And thank You for the right and privilage of putting the pride of man to death. Glory to You Forever! Amen.

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